Write approval-worthy messages:

Solve china dataset issues with shared expertise and innovation.
Post Reply
rifat28dddd
Posts: 695
Joined: Fri Dec 27, 2024 12:35 pm

Write approval-worthy messages:

Post by rifat28dddd »

Writing how you speak: Ditch the formality of an email and keep your tone conversational, personal, and brief. No need to sign off with “Sincerely, Me.”
Let’s review one poor example:

The 4 Main Types of LinkedIn Outreach - Direct Messages (Poor Example)
This is a sales pitch (and not a great one). It doesn’t build a relationship. And “Dear Mr./Ms.” creates unnecessary distance between you and your lead. (In case you didn’t realize, this isn’t a real message. James is way cooler than that.)

Now, a good DM:

The 4 Main Types of LinkedIn Outreach - Direct Messages (Good Example)
This type of message opens the conversation. It builds rapport. And sometimes, it can even direct the conversation to what you’re selling (in our case, an AI-compatible CRM system).

Use this direct message template to learn more about your prospects:

Hi [Name],

Thanks for connecting! I saw your post about [topic]. Great ghana telegram data insights! What do you think about [question about post]? And have you considered how to solve [pain point]?

Can’t wait to hear from you, [Name].

[Your name]
Connection Request Messages
Before sending those direct cold messages, you need to approve your connection request. This is the first major hurdle in LinkedIn outreach. You can also use the accompanying message to stack the odds.


If it isn’t relevant, skip it: “Hey there, I’d love to chat.” Cringe. If you aren’t going to personalize, hook attention, or offer value, it’s better to leave the message space blank. (When they accept your request, you can send a DM instead).
State your CTA: So, you’ve written a brief and relevant connection request message. Now include a clear CTA—whether you want them to accept your request, respond to the message, or visit your website.
First, for the ugly example:

The 4 Main Types of LinkedIn Outreach - Connection Request Messages (Poor Example)
See how bland that is? Now, consider:
Post Reply